Love made of...........

• zheyu

  17 Jan 05, 22:14

  Love like a cup of water.
  You drink more, then will be finish fasterÂ…..
  Because if you try one time, then can not leave it forever.
  So I scare to drink it, because I am afraid it will be finishedÂ….
  One day someone ask me you know what made of this cup of water?
  It`s tear.
  
• aRcTiC_sTaR

  17 Jan 05, 22:15

  Not bad, wrong forum though. Nice poem, but you need to improve on your sentence structure?
• zheyu

  17 Jan 05, 22:22

  Originally posted by aRcTiC_sTaR:

  Not bad, wrong forum though. Nice poem, but you need to improve on your sentence structure?

  Thanks teacher Arctic-STAR o.....
  because i am a singaporean lor....
  i am Shanghainese.....
  i will improve ....
• zheyu

  17 Jan 05, 22:26

  Originally posted by zheyu:

  Thanks teacher Arctic-STAR o.....
  because i am a singaporean lor....
  i am Shanghainese.....
  i will improve ....

  type wrong....
  i am not a singaporean....
• aRcTiC_sTaR

  17 Jan 05, 22:30

  Hehe good luck then.
• SailorMercury

  18 Jan 05, 14:14

  ok...lets play poem....
  
  Love Is Just An Illumination That Leads To Reproduction
• wolfee600

  18 Jan 05, 17:06

  Originally posted by zheyu:

  Love like a cup of water.
  You drink more, then will be finish fasterÂ…..
  Because if you try one time, then can not leave it forever.
  So I scare to drink it, because I am afraid it will be finishedÂ….
  One day someone ask me you know what made of this cup of water?
  It`s tear.
  

  Wah..... Like wan kind of sad leh...
  I feel that life cannot be filled with just ups if not you'll end up in space...
  It is during the down times that we remenber that the ups are just around the corner.... so... life is full of Ups and down and lots of sh*t along the way...
• zheyu

  18 Jan 05, 17:36

  Originally posted by wolfee600:

  Wah..... Like wan kind of sad leh...
  I feel that life cannot be filled with just ups if not you'll end up in space...
  It is during the down times that we remenber that the ups are just around the corner.... so... life is full of Ups and down and lots of sh*t along the way...

  yup.....maybe you felt a little bit sad at first.....but later when you pick up yourself....you will feel the happiest , you never feel before .....
  really o......
  so that`s love.....
  One kind of seasoning in our life
• gemini2

  26 Jan 05, 12:29

  if love is like a reservoir
  
  than no problem
  
  of finishing it
  
  but it is ver rare
• CyanSupra

  26 Jan 05, 18:50

  i thought is made of $$$
• zheyu

  26 Jan 05, 23:19

  Originally posted by CyanSupra:

  i thought is made of $$$

  Made of money?????
  can not think like that lor.......maybe some relationship made of money.....but i think that not love lor.....